Crazy Rodents Things...
It rolls around like a psycho pig
Trying to get as much dust on its cotton like coat as it can
Its razor sharp knife like claws grasping at the air as it turns
Its rat like teeth chewing on nothing
She stops... waits... then begins to roll around again as crazy as a hyenas laughter
Her coat getting shiner and more deadly as she goes
With dust flying everywhere she slowly, carefully steps out
Her claws cutting up the metal as if it were as soft as whipped cream
She suddenly bursts into a jumping sprint and is by her food before you know it
She slowly picks up her food with her cat like claws and tears it as she goes
Stuffing into her mouth like she hasn’t eaten in days
Ripping it to shreds with her dagger like teeth
She then appears back by her house in her house in her house
She slowly crawls in scraping the plastic
And falls asleep in light speed
Nice Alanna! I could totally tell what it was.
ReplyDeleteNice metaphors and similes!!!
Haha I liked it better whe nyou read it out loud. But... its really good :)
ReplyDeleteI like how you really described this as a monstrous thing, I especially like how you described its claws as knives
ReplyDeletegood i like the imagery and how vicious it appears to be
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